The tendency of human beings to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods, to what extent do you agree?
It is often argued that the habit of human kind is make facsimile one another’s behavior manifests explicitly in the famous of fashion clothes and consumer products. In my opinion, I completely agree with this declaration. There are only few influences which will get it on the stage.
Off course, it is true that the normal people tend to replicate the most popular one’s stuffs. For instance, the primary example could be observed from my circumstances is people are being adored by trendy clothes and elegant gadgets inclined to be used by the public figure or celebrities would ignite their thought to acquire those trendy clothes or articles. Moreover, Sneaky advertisers usually hire the leading lights in stardom would set the people’s mind that the commodities or clothes advertised by their idols are rich in quality and being made those particular products famous blindly.
Besides that, now a day people who aren’t unaware of the goods or not inclined to spend their time to step in research believe that the piece of advice from neighbors or someone, to use or wear something. A good illustration of this is, the online shopping websites such as Amazon, Flipkart, and snapdeal have the ratings which proposed by many consumers would get them the good commodities. So obviously, the product which have their rating at the peak would steal their attention to make them add in the cart list. Furthermore, when we have no time to pursue the good commodities there is nothing but trust friends and neighbors to go with something, which implies that we are copycats.
Finally, I recapitulate that people always replicate others to use stylish clothes, goods, and make them prominent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, finally, furthermore, if, moreover, so, for instance, such as, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1440.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12455516014 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75540917706 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619217081851 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.1002244279 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.909090909 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5454545455 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.27272727273 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139391742094 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499043336195 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602613987152 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0869774679143 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677053199588 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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