You and your family are living in a rented accommodation in an English speaking country. You are not satisfied with the condition of some of the furniture.
-introduce yourself
-explain what is wrong with the furniture
-say what action you would like the landlord to take
Dear Mr. Smith,
My name is Kevin and I am your tenant. I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding your rented house on the Oxford Street 8A.
As you remember , we had an agreement with you fort his accommodation with all furnitures but after we moved here some, some troubles have appeared. As I mentioned on the phone to you, the door of kitchen is not used properly anymore due to lacks of lock and its colour is becoming much more isolated. On the other hand, the dining table is in very poor condition and has unuseful right legs which has caused unwanted disturbing things during our launches.
We really would grateful ,if you send a technic workman to fix them or you could replace by sending new ones. I hope that you agree to this proposed solution.
I look forward to hearing a positive response from you in the near future.
Your Sincerely.
kevin
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 16, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...the Oxford Street 8A. As you remember , we had an agreement with you fort his a...
^^
Line 7, column 25, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ur launches. We really would grateful ,if you send a technic workman to fix th...
^^
Line 7, column 56, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... grateful ,if you send a technic workman to fix them or you could replace by send...
^^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Kevin
... the near future. Your Sincerely. kevin
^^^^^
Line 14, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ar future. Your Sincerely. kevin
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, really, regarding, so, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 745.0 937.175257732 79% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71518987342 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52750386354 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.753164556962 0.622605031667 121% => OK
syllable_count: 227.7 290.88556701 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5988899134 44.8134815571 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.125 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.75 16.8248392259 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 4.34317383033 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274788681244 0.216113520407 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092565629271 0.0766984524023 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747858799411 0.0603063233224 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.132058094963 0.12726935374 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0676289451705 0.0580467560999 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 8.37731958763 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.1 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.18 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.