The tendency of human being to copy one another is shown in the popularity of fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree?
Humans are social animal, they do not want to stay out of crowd. Imitating through dressing and goods choices are clear indication of trend. More and more people opting for same product is clear indication of its wider appeal. I do agree to this statement, we will try to analyze reasons through this essay.
Companies existence depends on its selling capacity, So it goes leaps and bounds to increase it using sale promotions and advertisements. Nobody wants to look ugly. Cloths and fashion not just offer protection from weather but also enhance confidence. People rely of each other as there is no standard definition of beauty. Wearing same type of cloth is an extension to it. This feeling is more intensified if some celebrity wear's same cloths. As famous personalities have huge fan following, they act as trend setters which general public follows. This is main reason fashion industry pays film stars huge amount to en-dross their clothing line. Children are no exception either, they are influenced through TV commercial or cartoon characters. It is not hard to see, human being's go with the flow attitude give rise to trends in fashion.
This is equally true in case of consumer goods. However, these mainly depend on features and reliability. Positive consumer ratings are considered as evidence for reliability and product quality. As in case of cloths trend also plays important role, people evaluate all options but mostly end up purchasing highest rated commodity. High rating reinforce their confidence in product. This led to more and more people purchasing similar product. For instance, Iphone is most sold item among youngster due to its positive ratings.
To conclude, it will not be wrong to say, overall humans like to follow trend for buying cloths and consumer products of similar type giving rise to popularity of products
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60951274891 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.654605263158 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 483.3 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.4345494805 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.8181818182 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8181818182 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.09090909091 7.06120827912 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142560933324 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0368722775106 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046782081578 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0917387270165 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347466644245 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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