As a result of advances in medical care. Average life expectancy is increasing for men and women. Do you think most people will see this as a positive development? What are the disadvantages of an ageing population for individuals and society? Support your point of view with reasons and/or examples from your own experience or observations.
Recently, there is a phenomenon of increasing the life expectancy for men and women due to advances in medical care. Although this phenomenon is due to positive developments, there will be many disadvantages of the aging population for society. For the purpose of this essay, I will analyze some of these minus effects.
To begin with, there are various reasons to agree to the aging population as a sophisticated problem. At first, if the average of life expectancy increases it will be useful for the moral of the people. But aging people have many physical issues. They require taking care of others to continue living. For example, oldness brings diverse disease such as blinding and deaf and needs nursing and care.
In addition, the grandparents are good guides for life. However, to enjoy of life, they require receiving the pension. the governments should make heavy budget in regard to their expenditure such as insurance. For instance, a recent research conducted by Tehran University researchers in 2017 has shown that a significant number of advanced countries involved in the issues of old population.
In conclusion, while the arguments on this case are compelling and different, I profoundly believe that despite all benefits on life expectancy and medical achievement, an aging population is very costly for governments with far drawbacks for society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in regard to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.5418719212 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 5.94088669951 34% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 31.9359605911 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1151.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 220.0 242.827586207 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23181818182 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.92707691288 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93396679549 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622727272727 0.580463131201 107% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 379.143842365 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 4.0 1.56157635468 256% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6551724138 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.5024630542 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 55.4159099621 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5384615385 104.977214359 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9230769231 20.9669160288 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.76923076923 7.25397266985 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.33497536946 94% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.391795983117 0.242375264174 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125533043552 0.0925447433944 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980684519367 0.071462118173 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229600542382 0.151781067708 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0997709185768 0.0609392437508 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 53.1260098522 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.9458128079 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 11.5310837438 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.6 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 55.0591133005 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.94827586207 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.3980295567 81% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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