Recently, the phenomenon of animals' rights and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that Zoos are highly beneficial for the animals' rights, such an issue regarded as thoroughly destroyer and negative by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that removing the zoos can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
To begin with, there are various reasons to agree with prohibiting the Zoos. At first, Zoos are used as a healthy entertainment for families over the years. However, the zoos are the main reason of animals vanishing. for example, the animals such as Kangaroo and Panda hunted by many hunters to sell to Zoo owners for their profitabilities.
In addition, the Zoos considered as a place for treatment and cure the animals and study their style of living by a number of scientists. But, it can allow the many criminals to kill the animal legally. For instance, a recent scientific research conducted by MIT University researchers in 2017 has shown that a significant number of endangered animals hunted by the hunters under the cover of scientific studies all around the world.
In conclusion, while there are several compelling arguments on the Zoos and their hurts to animals, I profoundly believe that the drawbacks of Zoos on animals survival are gar outweighed their benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.5418719212 66% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 8.36945812808 84% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 20.9802955665 71% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 1207.87684729 95% => OK
No of words: 227.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07488986784 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91771662605 2.71678728327 107% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 139.433497537 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577092511013 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 360.9 379.143842365 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.4007190334 50.4703680194 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.727272727 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.6363636364 20.9669160288 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2727272727 7.25397266985 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251491481702 0.242375264174 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10175079074 0.0925447433944 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.054271445003 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159666128422 0.151781067708 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246085771776 0.0609392437508 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 12.6369458128 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.5310837438 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.32886699507 108% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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