When you're at the end of your rope, tie a knot and hold on. How far do you agree with Theodore Roosevelt quote
The famous quote "when you're at the end of your rope, tie a know and hold on" written by Roosevelt was always a debatable topic. Many people believe that we should be strong enough to face any difficulty at the hard times. I completely agree with the statement that we should not give up at any point of time in life. This essay would further elaborate the reasons why we should never be disappointed with clear examples.
Firstly, the statement is all about not giving up. If all seems lost and you are at end of the problem, we should hold on and help yourself by adding a solution at the end. Take Franklin D. Roosevelt, who is also known as FDR had a lot of rough times in his entire life time. He contracted with Polio disease when he was adult, but because of his self confidence he joined the army in 1938 and guided the USA through the great depression and fought in World War 2. The above example and data clearly exemplifies us that problems are common in every one's life but the present who fights is the real hero.
Secondly, many things in life take effort and time. Often we get to the end of the rope and just let go. According to Roosevelt, if everything was easy, nothing would have much value. Typically, the harder you have to work for something, the more value you are likely to place on it. This is the reason we remember things which we do with greater intensity and more difficult. Many things in life are frustrating. Sometimes we feel giving up seems the easiest and quickest way out. But there are times, when hanging on will get you to where you want to be. Be tenacious and hold on for all you're worth. For example, there are lot of hurdles and disturbance in our daily routine life, if give up on these problems we cannot lead our life happily. Thus from this examples it is clear that every human being on earth has some kind of problem and we must tackle the problems to live prosperous and healthy life.
According to the points discussed above, one can reach out to conclusion that it is better to tie a knot at the end of the rope and wait for it. In a nutshell, it can be concluded that it is better to wait with patience and don't give up at any situation in life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 10.5418719212 209% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 8.36945812808 227% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 13.0 5.94088669951 219% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 20.9802955665 200% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 31.9359605911 200% => Less preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1806.0 1207.87684729 150% => OK
No of words: 415.0 242.827586207 171% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.35180722892 5.00649968141 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51348521516 3.92707691288 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29825206385 2.71678728327 85% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 139.433497537 161% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539759036145 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 570.6 379.143842365 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.57093596059 89% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 12.6551724138 182% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8850840594 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5217391304 104.977214359 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0434782609 20.9669160288 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4347826087 7.25397266985 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.33497536946 169% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 6.9802955665 172% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 2.91625615764 206% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260214550185 0.242375264174 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695558507314 0.0925447433944 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0897787036402 0.071462118173 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162109568385 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0500066246875 0.0609392437508 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 12.6369458128 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 53.1260098522 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.9458128079 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 11.5310837438 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.42 8.32886699507 89% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 55.0591133005 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.5123152709 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 69.4444444444 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 62.5 Out of 90
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