The charts below show the percentage of water used for different purposes in six ares of the world.
The given pie charts depict , the consumption of water ratio for various types of purposes in six areas of the world.
According to the chart , the highest water consumption is agricultural use and the lowest in domestic use. On the other hand , North America consumption of industrial use , just over a half while agricultural use just under a half. Although, South America water consumption domestic and industrial approximately same ratio in the world. Conversely, EUropean country's industrial use , just over a half. Obviously, three types of countries ( Africa, Centra Asia, and South East Asia ) consumption of agricultural use shows a large proportion where's industrial and domestic water use indicates roughly same ratio. Overall, a very large proportion use for agricultural purposes while a tiny portion ratio use for a domestic consumption in the whole world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 7.0 14% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 730.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 135.0 196.424390244 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40740740741 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.4086580994 3.73543355544 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03688212831 2.65546596893 114% => OK
Unique words: 69.0 106.607317073 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.511111111111 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.2598701297 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.285714286 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2857142857 22.9334400587 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281961446148 0.215688989381 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15485976306 0.103423049105 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087325795738 0.0843802449381 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.265031685973 0.15604864568 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390940559021 0.0819641961636 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 61.2550243902 71% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 11.4140731707 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.