Some people think it is more beneficial to play sports that are played in teams, e.g. football. However, some people think it is more beneficial to play individual sports, e.g. tennis and swimming. Discuss about views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, playing sports is the one of the soul mate in our entertainment and fitness world. In the sports, people may think that playing sports with group of people compose more benefits than playing by own or vise versa. Even though these thoughts deserves to exhibits like this we would get vast of benefits by going with both.
In my opinion, people who inclined to agree with more benefits only given by particular kind of sport in terms of team or individual are definitely former of the same kind of sport that they are supporting. For Instance, if we had professional career with football we would recommend and persuade someone to step in to our profession by flattering and explaining advantages of our field. In another way, some people support who aren’t even in the particular field think that the grass is always greener on the other side. To illustrate, a person from individual sport would recommend the team sport because of that person haven’t succeed on his field.
According to my thinking, playing sports with team members will definitely induce our co-ordination skills and interaction skills. One simple example, We would have seen biggest partnerships between the two players in Cricket to score runs and to win the match just by the coordination and better understandings. on the other hand, a person in individual sport learns to be self reliant and their success is completely depend on their own efforts. To exemplify, if they want to win they cant count on someone else to carry them to the competition like tennis, swimming if they lose they cant blame anyone else for the failure. thus this teaches to be responsible for their own decisions. However, these sports have more similar advantages such as fitness, focus, Responsibility etc..
To recapitulate, even though they seem to be have more benefits one than another undoubtedly both have equivalent advantages which would make our life better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: seen the biggest
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Suggestion: On
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...like tennis, swimming if they lose they cant blame anyone else for the failure. thus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, thus, for instance, kind of, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1630.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06211180124 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76959439962 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537267080745 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1123447291 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.428571429 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.217513784081 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0794468922208 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0995207804934 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133959134241 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898849435961 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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