Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to express my dissatisfaction with the meal, I had at your restaurant on April 29.
Let me explain my situation in detail. My name is John and I am a member of Berely organization. My group and I meet at your restaurant regularly. We are always satisfied with your services and delicious food. But, last Monday, we were disappointed with the quality of meal, we ordered. My group had ordered Chinese whereas I had deal 2. The pieces of chicken in both the meals were tasteless and overcooked. So we had called and asked the waiter to return the meals with proper one, but it was not available. We had then ordered a new meal which was also not satisfactory. The waiter had told us that your restaurant chef has been changed and new one is not much experienced.
I and my group was very disappointed with the quality of meal prepared by your new chef so we have decided to discontinue our meetings at your restaurant until your food quality will be improved again. I suggest you to train your new chef or you hire an expert one. Otherwise, it will leave the negative impact on your restaurant’s reputation. I hope that you will consider my suggestions and will take some actions.
I am look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
John Smith
- You have recently started to work in a new company. Write a letter to a English speaking friend. In your letter Explain 1. Why you have changed 2. Describe your new job 3. tell your other news 84
- You are member of an organization which meets regularly at particular restuarnt. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory.Write a letter to manager of the restaurant. In your letter-Explain why you are writing-Describe what the manager shou 78
- You have recently started to work in a new company. Write a letter to a English speaking friend. In your letter Explain 1. Why you have changed 2. Describe your new job 3. tell your other news 78
- You have recently started to work in a new company. Write a letter to a English speaking friend. In your letter Explain 1. Why you have changed 2. Describe your new job 3. tell your other news 78
- You are member of an organization which meets regularly at particular restuarnt. The most recent meal you had there was not satisfactory.Write a letter to manager of the restaurant. In your letter-Explain why you are writing-Describe what the manager shou 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 267, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Otherwise,
...our new chef or you hire an expert one. Otherwise it will leave the negative impact on yo...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, so, then, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1068.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 230.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64347826087 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89432290496 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85045016841 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573913043478 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9646277351 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.8235294118 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.5294117647 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.94845360825 228% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211155579208 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732347451989 0.0766984524023 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508800622174 0.0603063233224 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135328275981 0.12726935374 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0245263932742 0.0580467560999 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.2 8.37731958763 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.04 8.71597938144 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.44 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 41.2886597938 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 8.62886597938 58% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.