You have recently started to work in a new company. Write a letter to a English speaking friend. In your letter Explain 1. Why you have changed 2. Describe your new job 3. tell your other news

Hi Mark,

Hope this letter finds you well. Sorry for not writing for ages. I was very busy due to my office work and seem not got time for myself.

I am writing you to tell you about my new workplace. As you know, I had joined my previous workplace in tough circumstances so I was trying to switch since months and finally I got selected as Manager Databases at multinational company. My previous workplace was very stressful with full of problems and late sittings. As a part, it was less career oriented according to my qualifications and interests. Therefore, I was trying to seek a suitable opportunity, where I can showcase my skills.

Let me tell you about my new job. It is very challenging but quiet interesting. It is career oriented, lots of learning opportunities and have a vision. It also have good pay scale with interesting benefits including vacation packages, where employee can relieve all his tensions. I am responsible to manage all database servers running SQL Server instances. This will surely shape my career path.

I have one more good news for you. I am getting married in upcoming month and you have to attend it with your family. I will send you a card.

Best wishes,
John

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 154, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...arning opportunities and have a vision. It also have good pay scale with interesti...
^^
Line 7, column 162, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...pportunities and have a vision. It also have good pay scale with interesting benefit...
^^^^
Line 9, column 119, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...you have to attend it with your family. I will send you a card. Best wishes, ...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, so, therefore, well, you know

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74528301887 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8056166014 2.54303337028 110% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.627358490566 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 310.5 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 11.0 16.3608247423 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6035913074 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 55.8888888889 76.5299724578 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 11.7777777778 16.8248392259 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94444444444 4.34317383033 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223851936591 0.216113520407 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695673866361 0.0766984524023 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081960627018 0.0603063233224 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141354051305 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706482960028 0.0580467560999 122% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.77 70.7449484536 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.38 8.71597938144 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.4 8.54432989691 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.