You have recently started to work in a new company. Write a letter to a English speaking friend. In your letter Explain 1. Why you have changed 2. Describe your new job 3. tell your other news
Dear Anand
I hope this letter of mine finds you in a good health. I am inscribing this missive to inform you about my new employment.
As you know, I was totally dissatisfied with my previous job. As the pay was too less in relation to the work that I was doing. Moreover, the factory was too far from my residence. It took almost 2 hour journey, which was giving me too much exhaustion. Last week, I applied for a manager position in a multinational company and my hard work pay off, I got selected. From the coming monday, I am going to join tgat company. I am really happy because I have found my desired work with a handsome salary. In addition to this, company is also near my place. So, now I don't have to travel much.
I have another good news for you. Next month, my sister is going to be married. You and your family have to come to attend all the ceremonies. I will send you the card soon.
Eagerly waiting to meet you.
Yours truly
Radhika
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 204, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'journey' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'journeys'.
Suggestion: journeys
...rom my residence. It took almost 2 hour journey, which was giving me too much exhaustio...
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Line 5, column 523, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a handsome salary. In addition to this, company is also near my place. So, now I...
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Line 5, column 566, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ompany is also near my place. So, now I dont have to travel much. I have another ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, moreover, really, so, as to, in addition, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 5.05154639175 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 32.9175257732 106% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 789.0 937.175257732 84% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33516483516 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40589708427 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 127.690721649 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.6628778517 44.8134815571 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 46.4117647059 76.5299724578 61% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.7058823529 16.8248392259 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.29411764706 4.34317383033 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232758920925 0.216113520407 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757744989203 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0698476093787 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141035345426 0.12726935374 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0660439081094 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 4.4 8.37731958763 53% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 86.71 70.7449484536 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 3.7 7.45979381443 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.71 8.71597938144 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.65 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.