Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously?
Give reasons for your answer and include relevant example from your own knowledge or experience.
In today's world, it is very common to findca city or country where there a immigrants from different places. In the past, people travel less as compared to the present era. Individuals come in search for opportunities and happiness, but they also desreve to settle i a harmonious city, which government can provide.
Firstly, authorities can make sure that schoolsteach history and culture from more than one nation or city, not only the native land. Because, by doing this method, masses will come to know about different cultures and traditions and , moreover, they will learn about their ancient history. That will help them in future, whrn they meet human beings from different places. So that would be easy for then to adjust in new environment, also, it would open one's minds and makes them more tolerant.
Further, when immigrants choose to settle in a country, the host regime should offer free language and cultural learning. So, they can adapt to the new environment easily and comfortably. By acquiring this knowledge, they can easily communicate with the native people without loosing their own identity. Finally, legal bodies , can have some stringent laws to protect folks from agression or prejudice, so that, when an immigrant face terrible attitudes, they have some protection. By ensuring people feel safe and the host country shows tgat it is civilized and promotes integration.
In crux, understanding others is the key to peaceful living, but lass should also be in place to protect people from those who cannot behave responsibly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a immigrant' or simply 'immigrants'?
Suggestion: a immigrant; immigrants
...n to findca city or country where there a immigrants from different places. In the past, peo...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...places. In the past, people travel less as compared to the present era. Individual...
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Message: Did you mean 'am' (first person of "to be")?
Suggestion: am
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ut different cultures and traditions and , moreover, they will learn about their a...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...ir ancient history. That will help them in future, whrn they meet human beings from diffe...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16600790514 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66453201759 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.652173913043 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.5751387313 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.538461538 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20145688289 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698609401237 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452301671347 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121436349118 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0582031723806 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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