Nowadays many countries have very cosmopolitan cities with people from all over the world. How can the government ensure that all these people can live together harmoniously?
Recently many people have moved to other countries and developed their talents. It usually goes to advanced countries. And there are a few things that people need to live in harmony with each other.
First of all, people have to learn the official language. Learning a common language makes it possible for people from other countries to converse. For example, if we can not tell or hear what we want to buy at Mart, we will have many difficulties in our daily lives.
Second, people need to know the culture of the country. Even if people do not know history, knowing culture will help us adjust. And if you have a place and a schedule to learn culture free in the city, you can do it. The government's free education is also an opportunity for many people to participate.
Third, people must know the laws of the country. For example, people need to know traffic laws in order to drive. I think we can make a harmonious country by going to a new country and learning and applying safety rules.
Fourth, the gathering of people from different countries could expose them to crime. In the country, it is necessary to select people and receive immigration. And if there is a problem, the police or the government should take immediate action.
Fifth, there must be various events organized by the city. Many people are willing to participate in this event if they have a specific seasonal event, an event that understands the nature of the country being held each month, or an event that you can enjoy or enjoy together.
In conclusion, we will not be able to live harmoniously unless we understand and respect each other. The government has a lot of support and people from different cultures can coexist.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, third, for example, i think, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1423.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74333333333 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54754565982 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516666666667 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1046742126 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.15 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.25 7.06120827912 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.327741815807 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102817808471 0.084324248473 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625742565185 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165385805463 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379480228206 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.4 13.0946893788 64% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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