Write a letter to your local council to complain about the street lights, which are not working.
• Why you are writing
How long the problem has been going on for
When you would like them to fix it
How they can contact you to respond
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing this letter to you to express my concern and anxiety over the increase in road accident in cities of Canada. local people want to make more light for night road
It is very regrettable that we have thrown caution to the winds and are rather insensible while driving or walking on the roads. The rise in total number of road accident in the past six years is nitrification enough that it is nothing but our negligence and breaking of basic traffic rules that has led to this regular rise in the number of accidents.
I sincerely hope you will publish my letter in your esteemed newspaper so as to create public awareness and concern about the need for safety roads. also less light cause road kill animal, crush with people acident and other crimes too.
Please manage the road conditions and try to improve the roads accident Problems and also try to improve light condition.
Your faithfully.
Cindy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Local
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Line 12, column 72, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
...sh my letter in your esteemed newspaper so as to create public awareness and concern abo...
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Line 12, column 150, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...oncern about the need for safety roads. also less light cause road kill animal, crus...
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Line 12, column 150, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: also,
...oncern about the need for safety roads. also less light cause road kill animal, crus...
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Line 15, column 58, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'roads'' or 'road's'?
Suggestion: roads'; road's
... road conditions and try to improve the roads accident Problems and also try to impro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 800.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 165.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84848484848 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34126161904 2.54303337028 92% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.648484848485 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6804123711 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.2401537168 44.8134815571 139% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.333333333 76.5299724578 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5 16.8248392259 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 4.34317383033 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113016382783 0.216113520407 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609734484917 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0575629907903 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614961118086 0.12726935374 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548705647954 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 8.37731958763 181% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.15 8.71597938144 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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