It is generally believe that some people are born with certain talents,for instance,for sport or music and others are not.However,it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.Discuss both these views and

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It is generally believe that some people are born with certain talents,for instance,for sport or music and others are not.However,it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician.Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Submitted by Bincy on Fri, 08/09/2013 - 03:32

Today's people are more keen about the importance of innate talents and training,when they try to clarify the different abilities in,for instance sport,art,or music.

To begin with,Nowadays education systems are being concentrated to the intellectual skills of the children.They believe that all children can acquire particular skills from the schools with continued teaching practices and guided support.We can find out plenty of examples from our school experience.

However,some people believe that innate talent plays a crucial role in the development of skills.They argue that some people are born wtih some extra talent ,which cannot be taught.So they explre their talents in an easy way with little support from the teachers or family.

Finally,I personally think that every person have some hidden talent,that are probably inherited from the genes. These skills help the individuals to achieve their ability in certain areas like music,art,or sport.Moreover,i think that without proper training and inborn talent,one couldnot improve their particular skills.Most of the famous musicians,artists,or sportstars have succeeded only because of their handworking,proper training and natural skills.So with constant practice a child can explore their hidden talents and develop these special skills.

All in all, I agree that every children can be learned particular skills in their life, but for to be a good player or musician, they need some inborn talents also.

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