Imagine that a company plans to build a new factory in your area. Discuss how the factory might improve or harm your area. Do you favour or oppose this plan/ Use specific examples and reasons toyour answer
Nowadays industrial revolutions are increasing day-by-day. As far as i am considered, building a new factory in my area has brought many advantages as well as disadvantages.
To begin with, it is obviously true that a new factory will bring so many benefits to my society. First of all, it will provide some new job opportunities to the people, many experts will be required to work there. Moreover, local people will get different types of paid work also. As a result of this, unemployement rates will be decreased in our society. Secondly, I think some local community facilities will have to...
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Sentence: As a result of this, unemployement rates will be decreased in our society.
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Sentence: From my point of view, all factories must be built far away from human inhabitats because it can be really hazardous for people's health.
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