You wish to enrol in a course at an Australian college. You have already written a letter to the college asking for information but you have not received the reply yet. Write a letter to the college explaining your concern because the course will start in less than two months. You need to know if you can still enrol and you also require further information about the course, including the cost.
Dear Sir
I am writing this letter to seek the details about the enrolment procedure of the course named Applied Data Science for Python provided by your college. Last month, I had sent a missive to your department to gather the information regarding the admission process of the above mentioned course but I did not get any response.
As the programme is starting within two months and it is being too late that I have not yet enrolled. The reason for being late is that I did not get answer for my queries from you. That is why, I am again writing this epistle. I want to know whether the seats are available so that I can fill the admission form for being a part of this course.
If, it is possible that still I have time to participate in the course then could you please provide me further information. I would like to know for how long this course would continue? And what would be the cost to complete this programme? Whether, I will get accommodation in the college hostel as I am new to Sydney and unaware of the surrounding.
I would be pleased if you respond back to me as soon as possible as you know, I do not have enough time.
Yours sincerely
Malisa Thompson
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rm for being a part of this course. If, it is possible that still I have time ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, regarding, so, still, then, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 219.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43835616438 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50387410674 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58904109589 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5247476967 44.8134815571 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 4.34317383033 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270855400305 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0852442343683 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0562840127883 0.0603063233224 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157917977753 0.12726935374 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0201625130393 0.0580467560999 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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