In our present era, lives are simple and relaxing than how they were during our grandparents time. Because of the technological advancement and various inventions, our difficulties have been resolved to a greater extend.
During the time of our grandparents, they did not had the luxury of owning cars with air conditioners and GPS technology. At that time, most of the people depended on printed maps for navigation assistance and because of that they often used to get lost and face problems in identifying the north or the south directions. And not only this but cars at that time were not made air conditioned or had any heating functions available. Because of which the traveling was extremely difficult in summer or in extreme colder times. For example, my grandmother told me that it used to take her four hours to reach the next city in winter times because, cars often used to stop on the way as the engine were not compatible in extreme weather. Where as, in today's time it takes us only two hours.
During our grandparents time, the universities solely relied on published textbooks and skilled teacher for teaching purpose and assignments were based only on textbooks or books from the library. This was due to the absence of internet and computer facilities. However, in our time we can use internet to gain access to variety of sources of information to complete our assignments or classwork. Even teachers benefit from the use of internet by referring to online materials for better understanding.
Thirdly, our grandparents only had landline phones to communicate with each other and used to communicate long distant relatives and friends through mailing letters to each other. For example, my grandmother told me that when my grandfather traveled to another country, she used to write him letters that used to take almost a week to reach him and then another week for the response to come back. However, in our time we can benefit from the technology advanced cell phones and emails with the use of internet. And it only takes few seconds for a mail to be received by another and calls can be made internationally without any disruption or delays.
Our time is better than our grandparents time in mostly, technological point of view. All these inventions of cars, mobile phones, computers and especially internet has made our lives better to a greater extend. Due to the rapid advancement of technology and greater inventions, our generations can see a much more advancement in their lives and would be more easier and comfortable than now.
- TPO-06 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 76
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Playing computer games is a waste of time. Children should not be allowed to play them.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answers. 70
- Do you agree or disagree with the following?Young people enjoy life more than older people doUse specific reasons and examples to support your answer. Be sure to use your own words do not use memorized examples 73
- TPO-04 - Independent Writing Task Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?In twenty years there will be fewer cars in use than there are today.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past. 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 51, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'did' requires the base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
... time of our grandparents, they did not had the luxury of owning cars with air cond...
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Line 3, column 735, Rule ID: WHERE_AS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Whereas'?
Suggestion: Whereas
...were not compatible in extreme weather. Where as, in todays time it takes us only two ho...
^^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 356, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'easier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: easier
...advancement in their lives and would be more easier and comfortable than now.
^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, so, then, third, thirdly, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 13.8261648746 188% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 43.0788530466 95% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 52.1666666667 125% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2142.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 431.0 407.700716846 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96983758701 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.48103885553 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85324348411 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 212.727598566 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.508120649652 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 676.8 618.680645161 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.59856630824 94% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.94265232975 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.1344086022 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1208658331 48.9658058833 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.736842105 100.406767564 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6842105263 20.6045352989 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.31578947368 5.45110844103 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0765102156211 0.236089414692 32% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0276743099772 0.076458572812 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0262914338109 0.0737576698707 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0478071904079 0.150856017488 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156247779042 0.0645574589148 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 11.7677419355 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 58.1214874552 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 10.9000537634 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 86.8835125448 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.0537634409 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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