tpo 07
The article states that American companies do not tend to obtain ecocertification. and provide three reasons of support. However, the lecture explains that it is not true and refutes each of the author's reasons.
First, the reading states that because of advertisement, Americans do not pay attention to the ecocertification label. The professor refutes this point by stating that American people do not tread different advertisement in the same manner. People can distinguish between advertising the own company product and advertising a certificate which was achieved by an international agency. it should be stressed that Americans react favorable international certification.
Second, the article claims that the obtaining ecocertification will enhance the price of the products and American people prefer to buy products with the lower price. However, the professor contends that all the people in the world care about the price of a product. However, the price of a particular product is important when a competitor offers a lower price. If all companies in the US add the cost of obtaining ecocertification to their product it is not important anymore. Besides, the price is not the only factor for consumers since American citizens value protecting environment.
Third. the reading avers that since American companies do not export their product, they do not need to pursue the ecocertification. The lecture opposes this point by saying that as the environment is important for the American citizens, refusing to obtain ecocertification will open the market for foreign competitors. It means that tendency of the American consumer to buy the ecocertificated product will increase the entrance of foreign companies which have the certification.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
...do not tend to obtain ecocertification. and provide three reasons of support. Howev...
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Line 2, column 385, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: It
...as achieved by an international agency. it should be stressed that Americans react...
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Line 4, column 364, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...when a competitor offers a lower price. If all companies in the US add the cost of...
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Line 6, column 8, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...value protecting environment. Third. the reading avers that since American compa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, second, so, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 10.4613686534 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 5.04856512141 119% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 22.412803532 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 30.3222958057 89% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 5.01324503311 299% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1373.03311258 109% => OK
No of words: 269.0 270.72406181 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53903345725 5.08290768461 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.31676437407 2.5805825403 129% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 145.348785872 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.494423791822 0.540411800872 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 476.1 419.366225166 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.55342163355 116% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 3.25607064018 92% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.23620309051 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 2.5761589404 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 13.0662251656 115% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7348457039 49.2860985944 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.3333333333 110.228320801 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9333333333 21.698381199 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.06666666667 7.06452816374 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 4.19205298013 95% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.403896419609 0.272083759551 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137624153515 0.0996497079465 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.072761987608 0.0662205650399 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.241567985988 0.162205337803 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624132999671 0.0443174109184 141% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.3589403974 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 53.8541721854 69% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 5.55761589404 202% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.2367328918 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 63.6247240618 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.7273730684 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.2008830022 107% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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