Some companies and organizations require their employees to wear uniform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of wearing uniform?
Uniform means wearing same dress by everyone throughout the organisation whether it is a company, school or university. There are many company's which want their workers to wear uniform. In following paragraphs, I am going to write about merits and demerits of wearing same dress.
Firstly, I am writing about the advantages. Dressing up in similar clothes shows equality among the people. It does not matter whether a person is Hindu or a Muslim but looks similar in uniform. This is the reason that various organisations make dress compulsory for the employees so that nobody in the company feels superior or inferior. In this way, it maintains balance in the working environment. Moreover, dressing up in a proper suit provides a professional look to the employees. It enhances the personality of the workers and helps to make a positive impact on the clients.
Also, there are some disadvantages of dressing in proper suits. By wearing proper fitting clothes, people do not feel comfortable. So, they find difficult to work in discomfort. It causes loss to employee as well as company because if workers are not able to complete their assigned task on time, they will not get appraisals from their managers and as a result output of the organisation also suffer. So, it would be beneficial, if people can wear the clothes of their choice to work in which they feel comfortable. Beside that workers feel bored by wearing same clothes daily. It effects their mood as they feel gloomy and hence reduces their will to do the job properly.
In conclusion, I would like to say that although their are advantages of wearing uniform but still there are disadvantages. In order to overcome the disadvantages, companies would allow their employees to wear the clothes of their comfort and once or twice a week make compulsion to wear dress.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, look, moreover, so, still, well, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1536.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97087378641 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81540378377 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.53074433657 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.3813741472 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8421052632 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2631578947 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73684210526 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339528053291 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998438473582 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101306594959 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225151187858 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112707360082 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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