Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or films) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do.
To what extend do u agree or disagree with this opinion?
No doubt that creativity and imagination are the pivotal parts of any masterpiece, regardless of what form it is. While many people contend that artists should be granted freedom to convey their thoughts and ideas to the public, others reject this notion, believing that there should be some limitations imposing on this act. Personally, I am of mixed opinion on this.
On one hand, freedom in art offers many benefits to citizens. Firstly, it encourages artists to devote themselves to their career. As a consequence, a nation’s culture will thrive if composers, musicians, poets and so on are a...
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