Some people argue that it is more important to have an enjoyable job than to earn a lot of money. Others disagree and think that a good salary leads to a better life. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The trade-off between job satisfaction and high income has always been a confusing topic that everyone has to consider when it comes to career orientation. While many people claim that a passionate job should come first, others reject this notion, believing that a well-paid one ensures a stable life. Presented below are several factors accounting for the stark contrast between these two perspectives.
On the one hand, an enjoyable job offers citizens a number of benefits. Firstly, if people can pursue their dream occupation, they will have inspiration and motivation to devote themselves to t...
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