In many parts of the world children and teenagers are committing more crimes. Why is the case happening? How should children or teenagers be punished?
It is judicious that juvenile delinquency has increased significantly in many countries. In addition, there are many factors invoking this worrying issue. This essay will analyse clearly this side and provides possible punishments for children crimes.
To start with, the growth of delinquency commited by teenagers comes from various reasons. One of the most obvious factors is the lack of care and upbringing from parents. Several families in this contemporary society have adults who are always craving for work and promotion. They tend to have fewer time to look after their kids. Consequenstly, these vulnerable teenagers may need to find other soures of care, leading to more chances of meeting evil peers. Moreover, social media is widely believed to play a large role in this issue.For example, immature teenagers nowadays are bombarded by violence, drugs, sexual harassment via televisions, Internet, Google. This tremendous problem spontaneously makes juveniles to commit more inapproriate stuffs.
After realizing an alarming situation of juvenile crimes, suitable punishments need to be adapted as soon as possible. Firstly, offenders should be forced to participate in community service or psychological courses at school . If the teenagers clearly show changes in attitude, the length of punishments may be considered to bridge. As for more serious crimes, delinquents must be sentenced to life imprisonment. This method not only promises to bring safe environment for citizens, but it also creates a strict environment to educate misbehavior kids.
In conclusion, lacking in upbringing from parents and negative influence from social media are what juvenilescrimes are all about. Therefore, appropriate punishments such as public service or life imprisonment can improve the harsh problem and bring more safety for public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, as for, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69565217391 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03585853931 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673913043478 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2163885539 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4705882353 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2352941176 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.11764705882 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189977301795 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545852175728 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441576418535 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101099441033 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038786402418 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.21 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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