There has been an immense advancement in the technology in most aspects of pupils life especially in the availability of internet. Nowadays has become a poplular and significant source of information for students. There is always a question of consideration about the internet replacing the books. In my opinion, there is a no possibility of books being replaced with the internet. this essay will present supporting ideas and state some examples as well.
Education has changed its dynamics dramatically. With regards to the studying online, students usually prefer to resort to online information because of numerous reasons. firstly, students can access the internet anywhere without much hustle. it is handy, can be used on mobile phones or laptops to search any topic or clear he doubts. it does not need the consultation of a teacher. Secondly, some students cannot afford books because of the huge amounts of the price tag. For example, in India, some medical students from poor families can not afford some of the books such as the book of medicine by Davidson, which coss about 35,00 Rupees. Therefore they prefer online e-book at a very low subscription price. Internet proves to be a primary source of information for such students.
However, Plagiarism is an important aspect of the use of the internet. Faux information could affect the knowledge of an individual badly. Information provided on the sites can be amended, therefore the majority of people does not rely on the information provided by the internet and hence, resort to books only. Books play a crucial role in the lives of people because the information given in the books is straightforward and precise. furthermore, there are substantial novels and journals which cannot be replaced or amended. therefore people rely more on such books. In addition, students living in rural areas does not have the access to the internet, because of the lack of amenities such as internet connectivity towers. Hence, in such areas books are the only best source of information. Moreover, books always have been the best friend of an individual. Reading books instead of online information is still on trend.
In conclusion, books play a very vital rule in everyone's life. Some people use books as a hobby while, for many other books are the only source of information for acquiring knowledge. use of books by people can never be forgotten or replaced with any other source. Nevertheless, books cannot be substituted by any means.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, well, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2097.0 1615.20841683 130% => OK
No of words: 409.0 315.596192385 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1271393643 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.49708221141 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83569256313 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488997555012 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 670.5 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 16.0721442886 174% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0712830954 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.8928571429 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6071428571 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.75 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243357917136 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696516726883 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0607778863465 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166306197322 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0409248624882 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.88 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 78.4519038076 135% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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