Government should reduce their investment in arts, music and painting. Agree or disagree?
Recently, the phenomenon of reducing the investment in art sector and its corresponding impact has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that the matter of the valuable painting is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined that the expenditure of art exhibition by the government can be a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From a social standpoint, considering the governmental aid for art can provide the society with some noticeable effects which are rooted in the fact that merits of man-made goods, as well as the exhibition of sculpture, are inextricably bound up. According to my experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered the influence of governmental financial support on preserving the art values. Thus, the beneficial ramification of both the masterpiece and the contemporary art are apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of art, putting investment in art and music might increase the consequences of the popularity of art among young generation. Moreover, fundamental aspects of an art exhibition could relate to this reality that the merits of the visual art pertain to the accomplished painter. As a tangible example, some scientific research undertaken by a prestigious university has asserted that the downside of spending money in art is correlated negatively with lack of money in other social sectors.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of considering money in art sector by the government far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of preserving the art value prove the significance of setting up more art exhibition, but also pinpoint social implications.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 5.94088669951 168% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 31.9359605911 141% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 5.75862068966 243% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1572.0 1207.87684729 130% => OK
No of words: 291.0 242.827586207 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40206185567 5.00649968141 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24863883844 2.71678728327 120% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 139.433497537 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584192439863 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 379.143842365 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.71428571429 292% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 20.5024630542 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.1023483989 50.4703680194 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 142.909090909 104.977214359 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4545454545 20.9669160288 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 7.25397266985 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0517039221104 0.242375264174 21% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0236242156828 0.0925447433944 26% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348062654567 0.071462118173 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0351223418711 0.151781067708 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028139868659 0.0609392437508 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 12.6369458128 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 53.1260098522 69% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.54236453202 199% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 10.9458128079 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 11.5310837438 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.32886699507 122% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 55.0591133005 174% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.94827586207 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.3980295567 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.5123152709 143% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.1111111111 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 10.0 Out of 90
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