You had borrowed a book from public library. However, when you reached home, you found that some pages were torn away. Write a letter to the librarian to explain the situation. You should mention
The book
The pages
Suggest what can be done
Dear madam/sir
I am writing to inform you about a book I have borrowed from public library yesterday. My i.d. is 7045,the book i have taken is BUSINESS STRATEGY by Mark Furor, second edition.
However, when i opened the book today for my assignment work I got to know that some very important pages from the edition were torn away. The missing pages are from 17 to 32. Those pages contain significant information. Due to this incident I am unable to continue with my work.
My sincere advice to you is to check each article in front of the borrower when they come to return the book. This is the only way to keep a check. And do fine a penalty for those who use the precious books carelessly.
I would be grateful if you could arrange the same book in two days time, so that i can complete my work. I will make a follow-up call tomorrow.
Yours faithfully
Zeeniah
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rom public library yesterday. My i.d. is 7045,the book i have taken is BUSINESS S...
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Line 4, column 15, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...uror, second edition. However, when i opened the book today for my assignment...
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Line 8, column 82, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...the same book in two days time, so that i can complete my work. I will make a fol...
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Line 10, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...w-up call tomorrow. Yours faithfully Zeeniah
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 5.60731707317 464% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 719.0 965.302439024 74% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.46583850932 4.92477711251 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4217071902 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.683229813665 0.547539520022 125% => OK
syllable_count: 226.8 283.868780488 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 1.53170731707 522% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0452088975 43.030603864 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.9166666667 112.824112599 53% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.4166666667 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.91666666667 5.23603664747 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261088496486 0.215688989381 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744370945728 0.103423049105 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810640993263 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145882941943 0.15604864568 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0200524447283 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 13.2329268293 48% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 10.3012195122 58% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.05 11.4140731707 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.52 8.06136585366 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 11.0658536585 63% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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