Work for an orginisation in voilunteer
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to seek an opportunity of volunteering the task of English teacher at your organization - Teach for India.
I came to know about your organization from your official website while I was looking for an opportunity to work for. I was always looking to help the underprivileged students in the society and from your page, I found your organization is looking for an English teacher in South Africa to help such students. Furthermore, this will not only give me personal satisfaction but also aids me with an add-on experience that can be useful in my career growth.
I have completed my masters in English and currently I am working with my local university. Uring my studies I enrolled in numerous volunteer programs such as teaching students from local society, helping old age homes, and working with schools to provide books and materials for educational purpose. This helped me in my personal and professional growth that can be leveraged in your organization.
As summers are approaching, I will be available for one month from 1st June. I can put my extra efforts in evening physical activity classes that can shape the physical skills of children along with the academic background.
I look forward to a positive response from your side.
Yours faithfully,
Gurinder Singh baghria.
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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to seek an oppo...
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...ponse from your side. Yours faithfully, Gurinder Singh baghria.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, look, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1118.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 220.0 206.0 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08181818182 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96733925776 2.54303337028 117% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 127.690721649 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604545454545 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 347.4 290.88556701 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 16.3608247423 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.2204762774 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.636363636 76.5299724578 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 16.8248392259 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.36363636364 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175446538888 0.216113520407 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0686728772929 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0723970959147 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0762951442513 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709987840957 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 70.7449484536 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 8.71597938144 140% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.72 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 41.2886597938 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 8.62886597938 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 8.54432989691 117% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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