The pie diagram present how teenagers are using their leisure time in 2013 between reading, watching TV and internet compared with three country UK, USA and Australia.
According to the pie chart generally here shows that Australia and America teenagers are more interested in watching TV than other Activities. In other hand Britain teenagers preferred on reading in leisure time.
To specify 45% Australia and American teenagers are busy watching TV in their leisure time markedly, comparing with UK teenagers only 20%. British teenagers are highest position on reading activities in their free time significantly exactly half percent and USA and Australian teenagers whereas on proportion respectively 15 and 30. In addition, using internet is free time almost every country is interested it's around 25 to 40 %.
Overall, pie chart reveals Australian and American teenagers are quietly preferred watching TV when the got time more than other activities and British teenagers like to read in their free time mostly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 158, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'are the highest'.
Suggestion: are the highest
...K teenagers only 20%. British teenagers are highest position on reading activities in their...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 33.7804878049 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 867.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 159.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.45283018868 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55098862472 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72499283256 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547169811321 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.6574261941 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.857142857 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7142857143 22.9334400587 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.440589840726 0.215688989381 204% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.218725152218 0.103423049105 211% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101509454087 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.300971625088 0.15604864568 193% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813721535389 0.0819641961636 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 11.4140731707 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.2 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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