The diagrams below show the stages and equipment used in the cement-making process, and how cement is used to produce concrete for building purposes.
Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The diagram illustrate the different stage and technology involved processing for the cement production as well as concrete production using cement for construction purpose.
Overall, there are five stage are involved of producing cement beginning with the making powder from small stone and clay and end with the packaging cement. There are four different material are used for concrete production.
According to the first diagram, the initial stage clay and limestone are put into the crusher machine for making powder. When powder out from the crusher then it stored in the mixer. The limestone and clay powder are mixing in the mixer and then the powder is passed through the rotating heater. In this step powder are rotating several times and heat is produce into the rotating heater. This process are continues until the cement is making. Then it is removed from the rotating heater and put into the grinder. The final step the ginger machine produce the cement and then cement are packaging in the begs and supply in the market.
The second diagram shows, different stage involved for macking concrete. First of all, 15% cement and 10% water are mixing into the concrete machine. Then sand and small stone are also added into the concrete machine which is 25% and 50% respectively. All material are mixing into the concrete mixer and it is rotating until the concrete are produce.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 13, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'illustrates'.
Suggestion: illustrates
The diagram illustrate the different stage and technology invo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nt for construction purpose. Overall, there are five stage are involved of pro...
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Line 5, column 122, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “When” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... the crusher machine for making powder. When powder out from the crusher then it sto...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, second, so, then, well, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 7.0 271% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 6.8 206% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1168.0 965.302439024 121% => OK
No of words: 231.0 196.424390244 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05627705628 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32899628251 2.65546596893 88% => OK
Unique words: 100.0 106.607317073 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.4329004329 0.547539520022 79% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 365.4 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 8.94146341463 157% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.4155280568 43.030603864 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.4285714286 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 5.23603664747 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.09268292683 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247732746603 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0931649705448 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0790736244615 0.0843802449381 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189505502827 0.15604864568 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755508224506 0.0819641961636 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.64 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.