Recently, the phenomenon of using the Internet instead of traditional classrooms and its corresponding impacts has sparked a heated debate. Although contested by many that online education is highly beneficial, such issue is regarded thoroughly both constructive and positive by a substantial number of individuals. I am inclined to believe that applying web instead of classroom tutors is a plus, and I will analyze that throughout this essay.
From the social standpoint, using the Internet to teach pupils can provide the society with some noticeable benefits which are rooted in the fact that reducing traffic congestion, as well as saving energy, are inextricably bound up. According to my personal experience, when I was a university student, I performed an academic experiment which discovered huge economic impact while eliminating school classes. Thus, beneficial ramifications of both social and personal issues apparently can be seen.
Within the realm of education, spreading Internet and substituting teachers might increase the consequences of improved quality of studies. Moreover, fundamental aspects of technology related to this reality that the demerits of implementing web education pertain to the knowledge available online. Hence, it is correct to presume the preconceived notion of Internet application.
To conclude, while there are several compelling arguments on both sides, I profoundly believe that the benefits of replacing classroom teacher with Internet far outweigh its drawbacks. Not only do the advantages of web teaching prove the significance of eliminating teachers, but also pinpoint technology implications.
- Online language learning has advantages over classroominstruction.Choose whether you agree or disagree with this statement anddiscuss why you chose that position. Support your point of viewwith details from your own experiences, observations orreading. 77
- In many cultures, the priority is given to marriage over employment. What's your opinion on getting married without worrying about getting a job? 80
- In some countries, the number of shooting massacres increases because many people have guns at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ? Give specific reason and examples to support your answer. 85
- Age discrimination occurs when a decision is made on the basis of a person’s age. In the workplace, these are most often decisions about being employed in the first place, winning promotions or being unfairly dismissed. Should discrimination against old 84
- In many cultures, the priority is given to marriage over employment. What's your opinion on getting married without worrying about getting a job? 55
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, hence, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.5418719212 85% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 6.10837438424 65% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 8.36945812808 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 5.94088669951 151% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 20.9802955665 81% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 5.75862068966 139% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1207.87684729 117% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.84297520661 5.00649968141 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1984432044 2.71678728327 118% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 139.433497537 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.673553719008 0.580463131201 116% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.65517241379 109% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.5024630542 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4012815708 50.4703680194 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.545454545 104.977214359 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.9669160288 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.25397266985 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.187065323325 0.242375264174 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0615224020669 0.0925447433944 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0599619475627 0.071462118173 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101275600436 0.151781067708 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0298623846691 0.0609392437508 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.1 12.6369458128 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 53.1260098522 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 10.9458128079 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.59 11.5310837438 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.25 8.32886699507 135% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 55.0591133005 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.3980295567 104% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 72.0 Out of 90
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