Some people think that a car is the best way to travel in cities while other believe that bicycle is the better way. Discuss both views and give your opinion
With the rise in modernization, a man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking barefooted in the jungles to take first step on the moon. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irreuocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that should car is the appropriate method to travel in cities or bicycle? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic with illustration and examples and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there is a group of people who reckon that using car to travel in cities is highly benefical. They strengthen their view point by claiming if we travel through car it help to save our precious time as, "Time and tides waits for none." Therefore, by using cab everyone will be able to reach their destination with in a time limit. Moreover, travel through car also provide sense of happiness because, all family members were able to travel by using single transport system. As a result, journey by car leads to joy and happiness.
Contrary to this, there is an opposing group of people who believe that bicycle is the best way to move from one place to another. To make their view point convincing they claim that it is highly suitable for healthy life. It is common saying that "Prevention is better than cure" so, using bicycle as a transport system helps to enhance the body functions. A good illustration of this is that it improve the blood circulation. consequently, it help to overcome the cardiac diseases especially, high blood pressure and heart attack would be the best epitome of this.Beside it, using cycle as a transport help to preserve natural resources for example, petrol, diesel because, its working not depend upon any fuel. Hence, it is cost effective method and best way to conserve natural resources.
To sum up, weighing both options, i believe that there is no single conclusion of this topic still, I take this ground that an effective clap require both use of hands. Nodoubt, using cab as a means of transportation leads to happiness which is "part and parcel" of life. But, travel through bicycle also enhance the overall functioning of the body.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, then, therefore, for example, for instance, as a result, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1848.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 375.0 315.596192385 119% => OK
Chars per words: 4.928 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.40055868397 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80044948773 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557333333333 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 571.5 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7252443246 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.666666667 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20320886625 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.060645459078 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553245998922 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111361587554 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0255045972185 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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