In recent period reading newspapers and watching television news has been common activities in modern human's life. But there is contention significantly, some people's are agreed with this statement; whereas, other have the conflicting views.Here in the below essay I will try to enunciate this fact with my own perception.
As far as I am concerned that reading newspapers and watching TV is not wasting of time rather it has much better benefits for people's everyday life. For example: People's can learn such as good things from newspaper, like as how to stay in healthy life, how to use modern technology, how to love or treat each other, how to fight against the evil. In other hand by watching TV news we can acknowledge all around the world condition easily, able to serve fantastic tips about the relation with each others. Even though there is some disadvantages like, sometime newspaper has been published fake news or some time short of valueless article with meaningless word. Moreover,some TV channel also broadcasting unhelpful news or sometime there is political issues they telecast which is wrong unexpectedly. However, there is still advantage.
In addition, there is some more direct connection with people's daily lives by reading newspaper and watching TV news. Firstly, living as a member of competition planet we must need to be updated to compete with each other,otherwise, it's gonna be hard to get a good opportunity. For example: Developing country people's are not that much reader than developed country, as a result they can't compete with them in internationally.Secondly, people's are always been the reason for environment pollution, just as air, water and other related contamination. Human's also cause's for deforestation.So television has been given the advantage by broadcasting news about the awareness of pollution, though People's can be aware by watching TV. Thirdly,loneliness has been getting peak problem in modern human's life markedly,so reading newspapers or watching television can be reduce the problem.
To recapitulate,reading newspaper's and watching TV news habit might be great advantage for people's life. So everybody should grab this benefit and start to make habit in everyday life's.
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...this benefit and start to make habit in everyday lifes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, whereas, for example, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1886.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.34277620397 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23548962813 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563739376771 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 585.9 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1330049251 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.733333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 16.0 5.01903807615 319% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283266731609 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109265585381 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101197098259 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178505644564 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0262078566766 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.53 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.