Corporations generally drive their decisions based on maximizing their profits. This directly as well as indirectly effects the general population of a nation. What is a nation without its people. Its effects have largely been observed the recent days.
Lets first discuss how this effects at an individual level thus effecting the nation. Most companies such as consumer grade products are at a very high price point. These products such as the IPhones from Apple Inc. gives a status quo to an individual. To match this social standards individuals they tend to overspend on such goods and services. This in turn decreases the spending capability of an individual on essentials and important things like education, financial stability and securing of their future.
Secondly, in order to attain such high profit margins a company has to cut down on its operation expenses somewhere. One example can be the labor working hard to make and provide these goods and services. Especially unskilled labor. This has become a recent issue across the world where the wages of theses individuals has been reduced to less than legally stated minimum wages. Such companies then go to other counties where the unskilled labor is cheap and more flexible. This does make sense for such corporations. But this this leads a reduction in the number of available jobs and increased unemployment in their nation.
Countries have started to acknowledge this issue and have passed new laws to reduce the tax on the companies to bring back jobs to their countries. Most executives who are the only one to profit do not think about its effect on their nation. I strongly agree with the view put forward by the author.
- "The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large." Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your o 16
- "The desire of corporations to maximize profits creates conflict with the general welfare of the nation at large." Discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the opinion stated above. Support your views with reasons and/or examples from your o 50
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: this
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, secondly, so, then, thus, well, as to, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 19.5258426966 36% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 12.4196629213 8% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 14.8657303371 61% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 11.3162921348 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 58.6224719101 65% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 2235.4752809 64% => OK
No of words: 282.0 442.535393258 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0390070922 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62218877086 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613475177305 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 704.065955056 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 23.0359550562 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5905240719 60.3974514979 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.05 118.986275619 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 14.1 23.4991977007 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.21951772744 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 10.2758426966 78% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0916767844561 0.243740707755 38% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0297930108615 0.0831039109588 36% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0407689841756 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0612713197456 0.150359130593 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260909174434 0.0667264976115 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 48.8420337079 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 12.1743820225 72% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.38706741573 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 100.480337079 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 11.2143820225 68% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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