More and more young children have mobile phone. Some people say it is a good thing for them, while others say it is a bad thing. What is your opinion?
Mobile has become a popular means of communication and is available at moderate prices. Most of the youngsters carry cell phone with them. Some of the individuals believe that it is beneficial for teenagers while others find it detrimental. In my opinion, I think that although, there are disadvantages of using this device but advantages overweight them.
There are plethora of benefits of mobile. Firstly, students those who are staying in hostels, remain in touch with their family and friends through this communication device. Secondly, children can call parents during their way to or from the educational institute in case of emergency. Thirdly, wireless telephone helps youngsters in their studies and doing assignments. Phones with internet access facilitates children to search the topics online and complete their assessments.
Moreover, scholars can find the meanings of difficult words easily and within few seconds by installing applications of dictionary on their cell phones. It is not possible to carry a dictionary along them all the time. So, in this case mobile phones are beneficial as they are portable. Lastly, young people can download brainstorming games, such as word forming, chess etctera, to play in their leisure time to refresh mind.
Moving further, there are also disadvantages. Students waste most of their time on playing games, listening to music, chatting with online friends, etctera. It impacts their grades in examinations as well as their health, for example, weak eyesight.
In conclusion, I would like to say that wireless phones has pros and cons. Parents should make their children understand about the drawbacks of excessive use of phones and encourage them to use this device for productive tasks so that drawbacks can be turned into benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 140, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
... youngsters carry cell phone with them. Some of the individuals believe that it is benefici...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39361702128 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84779151329 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624113475177 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.22131727 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6666666667 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140424938128 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0430358800398 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0408314904344 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0798013132761 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0534259741108 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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