Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology.
In what ways has technology affected the types of relationship people make?
Has this become a positive or negative development?
Technology has grown rapidly in the past 40-50 years. The change in technology has changed the way humans communicate.
40-50 years ago, people used to write letters. It would take a few days to many months for the letter to reach its destination, depending on the distance between the both communicators.
The place of letters has now been taken by mobile phones, E-mails and many other things. Communicators, now are able to communicate in real time, without any delay. Moreover, they are able to see each other while talking.
Social Networking sites like Facebook, Twitter and many others have allowed us to do many things which was just a science fiction 6 decades ago. These sites keeps us in touch with our family, friends and relatives. We can share our pictures, our state of mind and even where we are.
Skype- a software that is now used by many people and organisation's to contact and view each other. The elderly people in my village were amazed when I was video calling my brother in the U.S. However, they were also terrified for some time when they saw it.
The relationships have become stronger with the changes in technology. A person does not feel himself away from their loved ones as they are consistently interacting with each other.
The changes in communicating has brought positive development, without any doubt. However, it has also promoted crimes like scams, spying and many other. Inspite of the darker side, many see its number of advantages mush more than its number of dis-advantages.
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