It is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends.
Friends are indispensable in every person’s life. Some friendships last for a long time while others do not. In my opinion, it is more important to keep your old friends than it is to make new friends because of 3 main reasons:
First, old friends are the ones closer to you, therefore they are more trustworthy. In other word, having an old friend, a person can share his secrets without hesitation, because he knows that he can believe in that old friend. As for me, I always share my stories to my best friends and he also shares his – that’s because we believe in each other. On the other hand, new friends aren’t as trustworthy; because you not that important to them, they might tell others your secret and disappoint you.
Second, an old friend understand you more than new friends. Playing with you for a long time, he must have known your strengths and weaknesses, therefore, he will help you improve your strengths and lessen your weaknesses. For instance, my best friend Minh was always complaining about me biting my nail, he told me that it would make bad impression to others; and now, thanks to him, I have given up that bad habit. At the other end of the scale, new friends take time to understand you and they might be shy to talk about your weaknesses; thus, they are less likely to help you improve yourself.
Finally, “a friend in need is a friend indeed”, when you are having problems, old friends are the one who are willing to help you. One time, I lost my wallet in the classroom and have to stay at the class to find it. At the time, all of my classmates went home except Duy (I have known him for 6 years), he stay at the class for 1 hour and help me find my wallet. Furthermore, when I’m short of money, he is always willing to lend me his money.
In conclusion, keeping old friends is more important than making new friends because of 3 above – mentioned reasons. There’s a trend on the internet finding things that are “Old but gold”, and I believe old friends should be listed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 316, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'stays'.
Suggestion: stays
...pt Duy I have known him for 6 years, he stay at the class for 1 hour and help me fin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, second, so, therefore, thus, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 66.0 43.0788530466 153% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1698.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 371.0 407.700716846 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.57681940701 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.48103885553 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58152926438 2.67179642975 97% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 212.727598566 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.501347708895 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 618.680645161 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.6003584229 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.1344086022 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2518580708 48.9658058833 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.125 100.406767564 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1875 20.6045352989 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.3125 5.45110844103 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.5376344086 18% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372020453001 0.236089414692 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15390121541 0.076458572812 201% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.187484581952 0.0737576698707 254% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271592359417 0.150856017488 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141536325941 0.0645574589148 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 58.1214874552 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 10.9000537634 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 8.01818996416 87% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 86.8835125448 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.0537634409 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.247311828 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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