QUESTION: SOME PEOPLE THINK THAT REST AND SLEEP ARE BEST METHODS TO RELAX,WHILE OTHERS THINK THAT IT CAN BE DONE BY INVOLVING IN SOME ACTIVITIES LIKE SPORTS.DO YOU AGREE OR DISAGREE. AND GIVE YOUR VIEW.

Nowadays, Office life has become so stressful that it is important for people to find time for themselves to relax. These are various methods to relax oneself such as sleep, rest, hobbies, and outings etc. Relaxation methods entirely depend on the habits and lifestyle of the people.

Many people who have sitting jobs for long hours prefer to relax by sleeping. As they are left with less time after spending a long day in the office. Sleep and rest give mental peace and it also helps in relaxing the body. The major chunk of people prefers to relax by involving in various recreational activities like Sports and pursuing areas of interests. Sports help to maintain physical well being of an individual with help of muscle pull. Every person has specific hobbies, but there are very few who keep their hobbies intact and pursue it with work life.

People are adopting various other relaxation methodologies as well. Practices such as watching movies, going for outings on long weekends to attain peace from the regular life is also increasing rapidly. Reunion with the old friends and colleagues also help in relaxing as its all about diverting the mind from work to personal life. Music also helps to relax the mind. Many people have a specific liking for music like Sufi, classical music etc and listening to that makes them happy and calm.

As per me, rest and sleep are one of the methods to relax but these are not the best methods. By following these methods one can surely attain mental peace but physical fitness is also mandatory. Along with these methods, various other methods should be followed like pursuing sports, spending quality time with family, helping poor people, joining youth clubs etc. These will also help in being a better human being and concentration level will also increase.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...and colleagues also help in relaxing as its all about diverting the mind from work ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1514.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93159609121 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29610966595 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553745928339 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1587432986 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.1111111111 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0555555556 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.77777777778 7.06120827912 25% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18434107365 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0680786692503 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0516195110113 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11996925254 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0240412765737 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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