Fresh water resources diminish in large cities in the world each year, what are the causes of this crucial problem? What are the solutions?
Water is the driving force of all nature and everyone should understand the demand of time as fresh water resources are getting diminished in large cities in the world each year because of overuses of water, increasing population, pollution, changes in availability, and water mismanagement are some of the current problems. This essay will discuss the main causes and the solutions.
To commence with, due to urbanization, enormous number of people are moving to big cities each year to have a better earning and living, which means more supply required to fulfil more demand, that is directly or indirectly contaminating fresh water resources. For example, in recent survey, chemical factories are polluting water by throwing disposable material into rivers and contaminating inside water by degrading soil through chemicals. Therefore, increasing population is majorly responsible to contaminating water and impacting nature’s lifecycle.
To cope up with these problems, strategies and programs need to be implemented by government with private sector and public cooperation. Government should raise awareness in people about decreasing water level and it’s our responsibility to save it. Everyone should save the rain water which is the best fresh water resources and full of minerals and vitamins which can be used for entire year for drinking and other activities. For instance, in Australia, on billboards water level is displayed using digital technologies which show public that this is the high time to save water and stop wasting.
In conclusion, the forgoing discussion propounds the view that there are several causes those are diminishing fresh water resources in large cities and population is the major reason which is interlinked with other causes directly or indirectly, to solve these problems we all should come together and take responsibility to save the water and avoid mismanagement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 296, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ailability, and water mismanagement are some of the current problems. This essay will discu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 10.5418719212 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 6.10837438424 115% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 8.36945812808 215% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 20.9802955665 57% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 31.9359605911 128% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 5.75862068966 191% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1207.87684729 135% => OK
No of words: 294.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54761904762 5.00649968141 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 3.92707691288 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01326183143 2.71678728327 111% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.568027210884 0.580463131201 98% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 379.143842365 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.57093596059 115% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.5024630542 141% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 92.0611210012 50.4703680194 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 163.1 104.977214359 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4 20.9669160288 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 7.25397266985 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 6.9802955665 86% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 2.75862068966 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283682161687 0.242375264174 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106325274753 0.0925447433944 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851211038937 0.071462118173 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194677905767 0.151781067708 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0855219601372 0.0609392437508 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 12.6369458128 154% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.12 53.1260098522 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 10.9458128079 155% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 11.5310837438 134% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.85 8.32886699507 118% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 55.0591133005 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.94827586207 196% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.3980295567 131% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.5123152709 190% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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