How widely do you think the problem spreads that people spend too much time on work than their personal life and experience time shortage? What problems will it cause.
In the world of cut throat competition, everyone is running behind the money to have a better life. People spend too much time on work than their personal life and have less time for themselves and their loved ones. I think, this definitely causes physical and mental health problems and relationships also get hampered. This essay will discuss the problems caused and suggest the solution.
To commence with, everyone is running in rat-race and achieving better to remain in the competition and maintain the so-called society status so giving more importance to earning money and putting their personal life on stack which effects their bond with the family specially with children. As they don’t get to know much about their tradition, moral values and family love. For example, my brother and sister in law both are working and my niece and nephew are least aware about our ancestors and tradition. Therefore, people needs to start giving importance to their personal relationship and give sufficient time to them.
Furthermore, in today technology era, people have 5-9 sitting job which make them more passive and mentally drained out. This causes many physical and mental health issue such as obesity, weak eye sight and hyper tension. For instance, in my company, sales manager last month caught the cardio attack because of high sales target. Hence, people should understand that work is important to earn money for healthy life, not healthy life needs to be put on stack because of work.
In conclusion, the forgoing discussion propounds the view that more time spend at work place causes serious health and relationship problems. To cope up with that people needs to start treating themselves on priority as its first step to love others and maintain a healthy and happy life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 410, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: sister-in-law
...amily love. For example, my brother and sister in law both are working and my niece and nephe...
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Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: EYE_BROW[1]
Message: This word is usually spelt together: 'eyesight'.
Suggestion: eyesight
...ntal health issue such as obesity, weak eye sight and hyper tension. For instance, in my ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 10.5418719212 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 8.36945812808 239% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 5.75862068966 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1509.0 1207.87684729 125% => OK
No of words: 295.0 242.827586207 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11525423729 5.00649968141 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 3.92707691288 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4625339677 2.71678728327 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 139.433497537 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586440677966 0.580463131201 101% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 379.143842365 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.65517241379 164% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6551724138 111% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3110731513 50.4703680194 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.785714286 104.977214359 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0714285714 20.9669160288 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.25397266985 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 2.75862068966 181% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256847867914 0.242375264174 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0862416035576 0.0925447433944 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0986232320118 0.071462118173 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162313345012 0.151781067708 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10811120451 0.0609392437508 177% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 12.6369458128 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 53.1260098522 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 11.5310837438 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.32886699507 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 55.0591133005 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.94827586207 111% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.5123152709 105% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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