It is argued that a distinction between right and wrong have to be learnt by children at an early age. This essay agrees that kids should know how to judge different situations since infancy. Parents can share own knowledge and help their offspring to know a good thing when one sees it. Firstly, this essay will discuss why it is very important to keep a punishment in balance and secondary, discuss why modern styles of punishment better than previous.
First of all, caregivers may deal a huge damage to children by the punishment. Penalties such as physical or mental might cause on development; kids will feel lack of confidence. Moreover, they will full of doubts and will have problems in communication with friends or with the others. For instance, The Times after several experiments has investigated that the man, which was under less punishment’s influence, has 24% more chance to be hired after first job interview than those who were punished a lot.
Secondary, physical punishment is out-of-date method of upbringing. Certain countries have banned this action by the laws. Nowadays the best solution of rebels’ issues is a limit or temporary eliminate time for playing PC or consoles, watching TV, wasting time during serf the internet. Modern adolescents send school and learning overall to the second place. For instance from my personal experience, father have forced me to study instead of entertainment by taboo on video games.
In conclusion, punishment is necessary method for teaching children right and wrong but it always have to be temperate. Physical punishment is outdated method. Contemporary penalties are able to affect much more benefit.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 35, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'huge damage'.
Suggestion: huge damage
...us. First of all, caregivers may deal a huge damage to children by the punishment. Penaltie...
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Line 4, column 99, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
... children right and wrong but it always have to be temperate. Physical punishment is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, so, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21402214022 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90487242275 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667896678967 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.7660400291 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3125 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9375 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.375 7.06120827912 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260874955115 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071269497193 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0645066737236 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143138424727 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0758341045381 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.64 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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