Movies have become a source of entertainment for all age groups throughout the world. However, there are some film analysts who speculate that the current generation visual entertainment is losing its sheen. I believe that cinema houses will never lose its zeal because the experience one gets from watching a cinema on a jumbo screen is altogether a different and the happiness it offers to friends and families is indeed one of a kind.
Admittedly, a range of movies are being streamed online these days and it is more cost-effective and feasible. But, the atmosphere emanated in a cinema hall is truly a remarkable experience and can jolt anyone viscerally. For example, watching an action packed movie can surely enthrall a spectator with the dolby sound effects, the high-definition picturesque visual graphics and also the musical effects that reverberates throughout the body. Therefore the excitement that movie theaters offer is undoubtedly unmatched.
Going with friends and families to the premiers is a joyous moment as time spent with them is memorable. Sharing popcorn, snacks and soft drinks are all tiny moments that can be cherished and laughed upon. For example, laughing together at humorous scenes and singing unanimously with the song livens the atmosphere. So, the happiness of watching a movie with a family or in a group can take movie watching to a whole new level.
In conclusion, the unique cinema experience and the joy of having an accompaniment at the theaters is a undescribable feeling. In this regard, cinema houses will live on. The experience of movie watching can be increased if film directors are able to produce cinemas that send chills down the spine.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 393, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'friend'.
Suggestion: friend
...ifferent and the happiness it offers to friends and families is indeed one of a kind. ...
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Line 3, column 446, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... that reverberates throughout the body. Therefore the excitement that movie theaters offe...
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Line 7, column 103, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ing an accompaniment at the theaters is a undescribable feeling. In this regard, ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14079422383 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91539436437 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592057761733 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.1895174476 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.714285714 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123414373522 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.042893754325 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040555836121 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769919838757 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0276308819964 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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