Dear Tim,
I hope you're fine, I heard from Sam that you are looking for an accommodation near by my place. I have a suggestion for you, you can live at my place since I'm moving out to an different place.
As you are aware, i got married a year ago and awaiting for my new born baby we need more spacious than this house. I need at-least 3-4 bedroom for my family and also my wife got an new job offer from the nearby town.
My present accommodation is quiet a large house with 4 detached bedroom and has a large garden. Also it is close to local hospital and town school which is more convenient for my family. Also other amenities such as shopping mall, gym and sport center are nearby.
On the other hand, I think current house might suit your need as it contains 2 bedrooms with en-suits and also situated it friendly and quiet environment. It is just 5 minutes walk to city center and 10 minutes car drive to the office. It also has a leisure center and sport arena which is about 5 minutes car drive. And also its nearby the lake, during summer it would be a best time to go for fishing or occasional swim.
I hope you find this information useful.
See you soon,
Mike.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Tim, I hope youre fine, I heard from Sam that you are loo...
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Line 3, column 62, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'accommodation'.
Suggestion: accommodation
...heard from Sam that you are looking for an accommodation near by my place. I have a suggestion f...
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Line 3, column 79, Rule ID: NEAR_BY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nearby'?
Suggestion: nearby
...at you are looking for an accommodation near by my place. I have a suggestion for you, ...
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Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...for you, you can live at my place since Im moving out to an different place. A...
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Line 3, column 174, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...live at my place since Im moving out to an different place. As you are aware, ...
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Line 5, column 19, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... different place. As you are aware, i got married a year ago and awaiting for...
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Line 5, column 48, Rule ID: AWAITING_FOR[1]
Message: Did you mean 'awaiting' or 'waiting for'?
Suggestion: awaiting; waiting for
...are aware, i got married a year ago and awaiting for my new born baby we need more spacious ...
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Line 5, column 180, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...room for my family and also my wife got an new job offer from the nearby town. ...
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Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...etached bedroom and has a large garden. Also it is close to local hospital and town ...
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Line 7, column 188, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...which is more convenient for my family. Also other amenities such as shopping mall, ...
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Line 7, column 265, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... mall, gym and sport center are nearby. On the other hand, I think current house...
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Line 9, column 374, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...rby the lake, during summer it would be a best time to go for fishing or occasion...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, i think, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 5.05154639175 218% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.32888888889 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29724042717 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608888888889 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 304.2 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.5827081743 44.8134815571 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9230769231 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3076923077 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 2.54639175258 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156500063681 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0529218240214 0.0766984524023 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525115940042 0.0603063233224 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0804270980098 0.12726935374 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588188100716 0.0580467560999 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.