Dear John,
I am writing this regards to the frequent late night noise from you house.
I can see that you have rented your property to the students. I have been living in this neighborhood for about 15 years. I never had any issues so far, but recently i can see that these students having party almost thrice a week. The party seems to start around 8 pm and last till 2-3 am in the morning. Also they are lots of rubbing thrown in front side of the house.
Initially, I have spoken the issue with the student and their agreed to reduce the noise at the night time. But its been like this for almost 3 days in the row. I have some medical issues due to this noise i cant sleep properly. Even the neighborhood is not happy about it. As most of the neighborhood are family orientated and the noise is not appreciated.
I would really suggest you to take an action as this would lead a major tread to the society, If nothing is done. I am afraid I need to contact the GARDA for the help. Its better to rent the house to a family or a mature students rather than teenagers.
I hope you can dealt with the issue as soon as possible.
best regards,
Kris
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 63, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...e rented your property to the students. I have been living in this neighborhood f...
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Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...n this neighborhood for about 15 years. I never had any issues so far, but recent...
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Line 5, column 167, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ver had any issues so far, but recently i can see that these students having part...
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Line 5, column 287, Rule ID: AM_IN_THE_MORNING[1]
Message: Use simply 'am'.
Suggestion: am
... to start around 8 pm and last till 2-3 am in the morning. Also they are lots of rubbing thrown i...
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Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...pm and last till 2-3 am in the morning. Also they are lots of rubbing thrown in fron...
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Line 7, column 207, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e some medical issues due to this noise i cant sleep properly. Even the neighborh...
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Line 7, column 209, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...some medical issues due to this noise i cant sleep properly. Even the neighborhood i...
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Line 9, column 222, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'student'?
Suggestion: student
... rent the house to a family or a mature students rather than teenagers. I hope you c...
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Line 11, column 16, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'deal'
Suggestion: deal
...ther than teenagers. I hope you can dealt with the issue as soon as possible. ...
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Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Best
... with the issue as soon as possible. best regards, Kris
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, so, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 953.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 222.0 206.0 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.29279279279 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2321308393 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59009009009 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.3444520117 44.8134815571 54% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 59.5625 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.875 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.375 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116332374301 0.216113520407 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0361606046529 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0458924790934 0.0603063233224 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0685213185951 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211443452986 0.0580467560999 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 70.7449484536 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.01 8.71597938144 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.42 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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