people emphasizing government to build an advanced transport system rather new roads for vehicles that are overcrowding the cities. Do you agree or disagree?
The transport system is a basic need of any country as majority of people commute by public transport. There are some people who give more preference to build high quality road since roads are getting overcrowded due to more vehicles. In this essay, I shall be discussing about the argument and will be providing my point of view.
These days people are buying new and stylish cars due to which roads are getting overcrowded. Another benefit of having own vehicle is that people need not to wait for public transport to commute between places and they prefer to have their own vehicle. Hence, people demand to have high quality of roads, so that travel time can be reduced.
On the other hand, majority of citizens prefer to have advance transport system, so that time can be minimized while travelling. Moreover, the public transport is cheap and affordable due to which people prefer to use public transport. Government should spend more amount of budget in improving public transport so that travel time can be reduced and more number of people could use public transport. This will result in reducing traffic on roads.
In conclusion, I feel that transport system should be improved with advanced technologies as it is being used by most of the people.
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- In developing countries tourism has advantages and disadvantages 64
- Education is important as it teach teaches ethics and life values as it teaches us practical things for future employment. What is your opinion? 77
- The importance of cars and airplanes in modern life. Give examples. 72
- Dangerous activities like extreme skiing, bungee jumping etc. And whether u support them or not 77
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 157, Rule ID: NEEDNT_TO_DO_AND_DONT_NEED_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'wait'?
Suggestion: wait
...ing own vehicle is that people need not to wait for public transport to commute between...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, moreover, so, while, i feel, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 10.5418719212 142% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 8.36945812808 60% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 20.9802955665 67% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 31.9359605911 97% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1052.0 1207.87684729 87% => OK
No of words: 214.0 242.827586207 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91588785047 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.92707691288 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49278809537 2.71678728327 92% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 139.433497537 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556074766355 0.580463131201 96% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 379.143842365 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.57093596059 95% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.6157635468 87% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.71428571429 117% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.5024630542 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.5939202362 50.4703680194 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.6363636364 104.977214359 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 20.9669160288 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.18181818182 7.25397266985 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 6.9802955665 57% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 2.91625615764 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213198560941 0.242375264174 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0848474244537 0.0925447433944 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496249863997 0.071462118173 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134692163424 0.151781067708 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274558421763 0.0609392437508 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 12.6369458128 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 53.1260098522 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.54236453202 47% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.9458128079 87% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.83 8.32886699507 94% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 55.0591133005 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.94827586207 106% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.3980295567 92% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.5123152709 95% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 55.5555555556 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 50.0 Out of 90
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