Advertising discourages us from being different and individuals eventually look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
Marketing and Promotion enforces people to look the same even with so many options available. I partially agree, that advertising leads to people look same, it depends on individuals mindset, what to wear and what they can afford.
Promotion of the products, on a large scale, certainly have impact on people's mind which lead them to buy similar products, eventually looking same. Brands like Levis have big hoardings across the city along with T.V. commercials flashing their product, which will surely encourage one to check-out their product, and purchase it. Moreover, if one is browsing over internet, there will be small add's flashing the website with products user have already seen, thus inciting them to buy it. That being said, it is just more revenue for the companies and a hole in one's pocket. Looking similar can create a sense of compassion and hostility among some individuals, such as employees working in an organization, where they can see junior's and senior's looking alike.
However, looking same can discourage some group, who has intention of looking different and grab attention. Additionally, this can lead to insecurity among people, as even after spending fortune they cannot be distinguished easily. Therefore, this can lead to spend more money, which only increases frustration. Nevertheless, every individual should think carefully think before spending any money. Copying neighbours is a vital problem which every individual deals with and wants to purchase new and better products. For instance, if neighbour buys a new car this leads one to purchase bigger car. Above all, everyone know what they can afford and what they can reject to purchase, thus having better financial management.
To conclude, companies promote their products very aggressively, so that they can motivate more customers, but it should be one's responsibility to check before spending and don't be a victim of this heavy advertisement.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 172, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...eads to people look same, it depends on individuals mindset, what to wear and what they can...
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Line 3, column 563, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...revenue for the companies and a hole in ones pocket. Looking similar can create a se...
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Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...tivate more customers, but it should be ones responsibility to check before spending...
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Line 7, column 174, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...onsibility to check before spending and dont be a victim of this heavy advertisement...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, moreover, nevertheless, so, therefore, thus, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32467532468 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78146529101 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61038961039 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3947930166 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.333333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5333333333 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166634158599 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0613721371105 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0636068958096 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112423145065 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0576437224089 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.