It is considered that governments should pay more attention to build rails tracks rather than roads. This essay strongly disagrees with this statement and will further discuss about the equal importance of both ways of transportations.
There is a believe that rails are the cheapest and easier mode of transport. Most of the people use railways to go to work, colleges and far places. Its is considers first preferance of poor and middle class people as they think that government should give subsidies to rail departments in order to make more tracks. Moreover, they can reduce the fares of travel and railways become more budget friendly. Furthermore, rails carry lots of travellers from one place to another at one time, so these are time saving also.
On the other hand, roads have their own importanc. Most of the businesses continue due to roadways. It is also considerable source of profit for government because in downtowns of the cities, they are mostly use by the passengers. Without good infrastructure of roads, other vehicals like cars, trucks etc can reduce their significance. What is more, in urban areas most of firms and companies drive their businesses through roads. Most importantly, well-developed and structured roads depict the growth and wellness of a nation.
To sum up, as we discuss both modes of transportation are equally pivotal. I firmly believe that government should spend economy in equal portions. No one can be neglected by the rulers because of their daily tremendous uses. In my perception, both the ways of transportation equally affect the developing process of a country.
- Some people believe it is better for children to grow up in the city while others say it is better to grow up in the countryside. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 56
- Government should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 10, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...oth ways of transportations. There is a believe that rails are the cheapest and easier ...
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Line 2, column 12, Rule ID: BELIEVE_BELIEF[1]
Message: Did you mean 'belief' (noun) instead of believe (verb)?
Suggestion: belief
...h ways of transportations. There is a believe that rails are the cheapest and easier ...
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Line 2, column 514, Rule ID: ALSO_SENT_END[1]
Message: 'Also' is not used at the end of the sentence. Use 'as well' instead.
Suggestion: as well
...r at one time, so these are time saving also. On the other hand, roads have their o...
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Line 3, column 208, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'used'.
Suggestion: used
...owntowns of the cities, they are mostly use by the passengers. Without good infrast...
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Line 3, column 366, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the firms') or simply say ''most firms''.
Suggestion: most of the firms; most firms
...nificance. What is more, in urban areas most of firms and companies drive their businesses th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, to sum up, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1355.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13257575758 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90885169076 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628787878788 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.6328163735 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 79.7058823529 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5294117647 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41176470588 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176441316784 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0483466668034 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657626853782 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115142714356 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101632624628 0.056905535591 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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