GRE issue - To understand the most important characteristics of a society, one must study its major cities.
The statement claims that the way of understanding the most important characteristics of a society is to study its major cities. But for different people, the answers to what the most important characteristics of a society are might be diverse. For example, historians who may regard history as one of the most significant characteristics are likely to study mega cities full of relics. In sharp contrast, travelers wanting to enjoy traditional art are expected to study rural areas where the traditions have not disappeared so far. Therefore, the statement is not absolutely right.
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Sentence: Thus, historians will learn that China, a time-honored country, has reached a high level of civilization in the early Qing Dynasty and gone through several devastating wars during the late nineteenth century after studying Beijing.
Error: time-honored Suggestion: time honored
Sentence: Moreover, people can also enjoy palatable local food and appreciate traditional art, such as paper-cut in small towns.
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Error: paper-cut Suggestion: paper cut
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