Some people think that governments should provide subsidies to farmers to produce cheap healthy food. Others think that governments should tax companies producing unhealthy foods. Give your own opinion and examples
Everyone has the right to get a good food items either from the farm or from authorized companies. People often argued that government should give extra payment for farming otherwise, give reduction for the things which farmers needs. While, some others oppose such as, government should levy a tariff on corporations for making low quality food stuffs. However, in my opinion is that, giving subvention to the agricultural workers is more beneficial, because, quality and quantity makes from the bottom as a whole.
Farmers mainly facing the challenge from money and materials. Get ride of such problem may enhance the production of high quality food materials and resources. Agriculturist is always play with mud and they knows the factors which is better for the environment and ripeness like fertilizer. Lack of such resources may inhibit the production and quantity of product. If they got support from the authorization can flourish cultivation and there by healthy food items would be the result. For example, Government of India support farmers by subsidies for plantation works and the result will be incredible when compared with previous years market.
Nevertheless, others explain that, introducing high tax for the companies might have inhibit the production of unhealthy food items. Over to the fact that, extra payment for adulterating substances may reduce the production and companies may use good stuffs for making. In addition, make use of levy would insist the authority to re think and produce good items. Irrespective of such hopes, applying tax may not be help customers to get good cousins. People those who used to be such companies product being stay with that product as well. For instance, noodles are well known product for getting many health issues, but, even after applying tax, customers are not subside the main news paper reports.
In conclusion, in fact, customers usually more concentrated on to the easy access for the food items if it is high price or whatever it is. Although applying tariff is good, have a healthy foods by farmers is more beneficial so giving payment or subvention is better in my perception.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1811.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17428571429 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70139646426 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557142857143 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8890954144 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.611111111 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4444444444 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.77777777778 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191314517271 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059173510816 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0537194697113 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112896814509 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0494781340646 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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