These days we are living a life, where we have to do a lot of things in a very short period of time. We have more opportunities & at the same time, we need to struggle with newly created complications too. However, there is no shortage of debate about the topic, someone prefers to do multitask in their work field while others prefer to engage with a similar type of task. I personally love to do different types of duty in my jobs. There are few reasons in my mind behind this, which I will describe in the following essay.
To begin with, It is more enjoyable to work various types of task in a workday. If we involve ourselves with same types of task in a whole day long, thus ultimately make us bored. As a result, we can't enjoy our work thus will effect on work result. My own experience is a compelling example of this. On my last job, I was appointed to print papers only. I became so exhausted by doing same things every day & finally I had to quit that job.
Secondly, if we are engaged in different types of work, it will improve our strength in the different sector. To be more specific today's competitive job market always want candidate a person with multitasking abilities. So we are failed to do a variety of jobs, we will be leg behind. Furthermore, if we lost a job we are not able to manage another job so easily with same types of jobs requirement which we learn in our single type working environment. On the other hand, if we have the strength to do another task too. We can easily find a job in the different sector.
In conclusion, I strongly support it brings more satisfaction when people do different types of task in workday rather than a similar task.
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- Some people think that they can learn better by themselves than with a teacher. Others think that it is always better to have a teacher. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 68
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 86, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e to do a lot of things in a very short period of time. We have more opportunities & at the sa...
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Line 2, column 196, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...timately make us bored. As a result, we cant enjoy our work thus will effect on work...
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Line 2, column 226, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[6]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...esult, we cant enjoy our work thus will effect on work result. My own experience is a ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in conclusion, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 13.8261648746 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 37.0 43.0788530466 86% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 52.1666666667 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1977.66487455 69% => OK
No of words: 313.0 407.700716846 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37380191693 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.48103885553 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57787942563 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546325878594 0.524837075471 104% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.6753191305 48.9658058833 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0555555556 100.406767564 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3888888889 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 5.45110844103 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241426758636 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902482484061 0.076458572812 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0968498107851 0.0737576698707 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209238007659 0.150856017488 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12138725337 0.0645574589148 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 11.7677419355 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 58.1214874552 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.1575268817 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.77 10.9000537634 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.01818996416 93% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 86.8835125448 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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