You have a pen-friend living in another country and he/she is curious to learn about the major news items in your country.Write a letter to your pen-friend. In your letter:•Greet your friend and say why you are writing.•Briefly describe a news story.
Hello Dave,
How are you doing? I hope this letter finds in good health and mental peace. I received your last letter and I am glad you are interested in recent news trends in India. I can you give you a brief insight about the few of the major issues which are affecting large population.
First of all, most of the political parties are actively endorsing their agenda over almost all forms of media as parliament elections are around the corner. You can follow daily debates by various candidates on some of the famous news channels, such as AajTak TV. By looking at popularity, in my opinion, Janta Dal party is leading the battle so far. Secondly, there is a huge debate ongoing regarding women safety, especially in metro cities where the number of rape cases are increasing these days. So, people are furious with the governments because of their inability to establish a proper law and order.
These are the major affairs which are affecting a large crowd. I can refer you to a media expert if you need to carry out further investigation.
I hope this information will be of some use to you and I look forward to hearing from you soon.
Best wishes,
Sandip
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 171, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...erested in recent news trends in India. I can you give you a brief insight about ...
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Line 5, column 213, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
... daily debates by various candidates on some of the famous news channels, such as AajTak TV...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, regarding, second, secondly, so, such as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 26.3917525773 110% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68269230769 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46003559891 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668269230769 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 312.3 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1204878987 44.8134815571 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9230769231 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61538461538 4.34317383033 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168790918657 0.216113520407 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0540763638497 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632248999533 0.0603063233224 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104276326799 0.12726935374 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794861477987 0.0580467560999 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 8.71597938144 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.